I have drawn both my examples from reports in Science magazine examining devices for quantum computing and communication.
Alas, I haven't got much domain-specific expertise regarding the phenomena presented. I have nevertheless attempted to summarize the background story of each image by largely syntactic manipulation of the original caption, paper abstract, and relevant portions of the body text.
Good:A. W. Holleitner, R. H. Blick, A. K. Hüttel, K. Eberl, J. P. Kotthaus. Science, Vol. 297 No. 5578. Page 70. 5 July 2002. ![]()
Story
The paper examines electron-sharing behavior at an electronic junction based on a pair of coupled semiconductor quantum dots.
More Detail >>This diagram examines the differential conductance from source to drain as a function of the voltages at the two coupling electrodes. Each hexagonal cell represents a charge configuration with n electrons on dot 1 and m electrons on dot 2. A major effect the graph is intended to illustrate is the pronounced resonance produced by the exchange of two electrons in the coupling between configurations (n,m) and (n-1,m-1).
CritiqueI found this diagram particularly elegant, as it presents a substantial body of raw, measured data in an accessible way while making the underlying structure readily apparent. Without having to look at the caption, I was able to correctly infer many of the facts it is intended to convey:
In short, the diagram tells no lies and refrains from simplifying the data, but still illustrates its structure in a clear and appealing way. |
Bad:C.H. van der Wal, M. D. Eisaman, A. André, R.L. Walsworth, D. F. Phillips, A. S. Zibrov, M. D. Lukin. Science, Vol. 301 No. 5630. Page 197. 11 July 2003.
StoryThe paper examines a method for producing of a pair of quantum-mechanically correlated light pulses separated by a controllable delay. The emission of the Stokes photon is accompanied by a change in the spin-wave of an ensemble of rubidium atoms. The application of a second control beam (the retrieve beam) triggers the conversion of this spin state into a second light beam (the anti-Stokes) correlated with the first. The figure plots a theoretical simulation of an initial Stokes fluctuation propagating and evolving into an amplified pair of Stokes (red) and anti-Stokes (blue) light pulses with locked propagation.
CritiqueWhile not terrible, there are several shortcomings to this diagram that make it fairly disappointing (at least in contrast to the high quality of technical illustration generally appearing in Science):
As the idealized trend being illustrated is fairly simple, the graph poses needless visual complexity for its low information content. |